The blog looks good, not the best ive seen, but still good. I know i am supposed to say something that i think you should fix, and i would say you guys should have maybe been more descriptive on who he is related to and where he lives and or lived. Other that great Job!
I really liked your fakebook! I thought that you did a good job with all your posts and everything. I thought that you were very descriptive with your posts. THe only thing is i wish you would have put more people on your friends list so we could have seen who you came across.
I really enjoy the creativity in this blog. Having the White Witch post on Edmund's page is hilarious, and I really liked how Peter commented on one of Edmund's posts. Your group did a good job of incorporating events from the story line into his posts, especially how he saved his brother's life. There were a few typos, and you could add more details regarding Edmund's profile information, but otherwise good job!
I really enjoyed this fakebook of Edmund. I liked how the Quee posted on his wall because he does not want to add her because she is evil. I also liked the friends list they chose my only advice was that they spelled January wrong, and they did not use Edmund title for King.
The blog looks good, not the best ive seen, but still good. I know i am supposed to say something that i think you should fix, and i would say you guys should have maybe been more descriptive on who he is related to and where he lives and or lived. Other that great Job!
ReplyDeleteI really liked your fakebook! I thought that you did a good job with all your posts and everything. I thought that you were very descriptive with your posts. THe only thing is i wish you would have put more people on your friends list so we could have seen who you came across.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoy the creativity in this blog. Having the White Witch post on Edmund's page is hilarious, and I really liked how Peter commented on one of Edmund's posts. Your group did a good job of incorporating events from the story line into his posts, especially how he saved his brother's life. There were a few typos, and you could add more details regarding Edmund's profile information, but otherwise good job!
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed this fakebook of Edmund. I liked how the Quee posted on his wall because he does not want to add her because she is evil. I also liked the friends list they chose my only advice was that they spelled January wrong, and they did not use Edmund title for King.
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